Tuesday, October 15, 2013

income inequality and student achievement

[Note:  In order to have this essay serve as the post one reads on initially visiting this blog site, I have moved subsequent posts to a new WordPress blog that can be found at jonathan lovell's blog]

As a university supervisor of secondary level student teachers in English at San Jose State University, I've spent a good deal of time over the past two and a half decades observing students at the middle and high school levels reading and responding to what they read.

Often, as I observe these classrooms, I see teachers behaving as if the Lutheran revolution was the only game in town. You know the general story. Luther upended the whole notion of the purpose of reading, and who should learn to read. Prior to the Lutheran revolution, readers of texts were primarily monks and priests, while those who could not read acted as listeners to the Biblical narratives told by this priestly class. These readings were frequently supplemented by visual renderings of these same Biblical narratives, often depicted as frescoes on the church's walls.

Luther changed all that, proclaiming that everyone must become readers if they were to understand their true relationship to God. More significantly for today's students, he intimated that if one could not understand what one read, one was meant to be damned. Damned eternally. Oh my.

Growing up in the late 50's, I was a child of the sputnik-inspired revolution in American education. Surprisingly, the sudden and quite unanticipated launching of this small orbital satellite by the Russians in the fall of 1957 had the effect of driving us back to the basics of the Lutheran revolution. Following this launch by our Russian rivals, American students' reading comprehension began to be tested systematically and frequently. Depending on one's ability to comprehend the texts one read, one was placed in either higher or lower level classes the following year: "saved" or "damned."

The logical culmination of this process, at least for me, came in my senior year of college. I was taking a class in the modern British novel by a professor I greatly admired. All of us "saved" students were sitting in the first two rows of the small lecture hall, laughing at the professor's jokes and nudging each other as we pointed to passages we'd underlined in our texts and comments we'd written in the margins. I chanced to turn around one day to look at the back row of students. There on the far side of the hall, hunched down in his chair, was one of my classmates, a good friend and a fellow member of my residential hall. He was looking uncharacteristically timid, peering over the top of his book, clearly hoping the professor would not notice him. I knew this particular classmate was extremely bright. In fact, he later went on to Oxford and then to Harvard Law School. What sort of educational system would lead to the conviction on the part of such a student that he was not among the "saved," at least as far as comprehending the complex narratives of mid to later 20th century British novels was concerned?

But that was the consequence, I later came to realize, of identifying those with special aptitude early in an educational system, then nurturing these individuals at the expense of those not "meant" to be saved. The cluster of the saved, of course, grew smaller and smaller as one rose up through the educational ranks. Eventually, so I discovered, it became a matter of fewer and fewer people talking more and more loudly to one another.

In my third year of graduate school, as I was experiencing this selective process taking place, wondering when it would be my turn to be pushed off the plank, I was asked to lead an undergraduate seminar made up of English majors who had a significantly different view of the purpose and value of the study of English. These students were not planning to apply to graduate schools in English, but were instead intending to pursue post-BA credential programs at a nearby university.

Since I'd taught 10th and 12th grade English at an independent day school for three years prior to beginning my graduate studies, I was asked to become the seminar leader for this group of undergraduates. And as it turned out, the questions they were asking fascinated me. How should the field of English be understood when it became the one subject required of all students in each of their public school years? Even more importantly, how should this field of study be understood when students were in classrooms by law rather than by choice?

And here's where Walt Disney came in. What if we decided to look at how students went about the process of comprehending complex texts when they were good at it? What purpose was served, after all, by subjecting students to reading programs whose primary effect was to increase the distance, year-by-year, between good and poor readers: "saved" and "damned"? Since I was leading this seminar as an adjunct to a course in Children's Literature, it seemed sensible to define reading as a matter of making sense of texts that were both visual and verbal. Isn't that what good elementary teachers practiced all the time: looking at stories in which the illustrations were as worthy of study as the words? In pursuing this line of inquiry, we learned that prior to the Disney studio's creation in 1937 of Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, the first 90-minute animated film, it was widely assumed that "talking animated cartoons" could only sustain a viewer's attention for about ten minutes. Sound familiar?

Disney and his animators challenged this conventional thinking, asking themselves what might make children want to sustain their attention for longer periods of time. Telling a good story was obviously a key ingredient (hence the choice of Snow White), but so was the appeal to our universal delight in sound, song, movement, and a bit of irreverence (hence the Seven Dwarfs). By drawing on these attributes of what makes kids variously talented and smart, might the supposed shortness of young viewers' attention spans be significantly lengthened? As we all know today, Disney and his animators proved the skeptics wrong. Kids could pay attention to what they were viewing for a good deal longer than 10 minutes. It was all a matter of knowing in advance what might interest and engage their attention, then incorporating these elements consciously and consistently into this uniquely modern version of visual and verbal story telling. Were it not for the 1957 launching of Sputnik I by the Soviets, perhaps this "Disney" understanding of kids as diversely talented readers and viewers might have prevailed in American education. Sadly, however, this vision of the late 1930's gradually faded, as our schools became more academic, more rigorous, more relentless in their widening of the gap between skilled and unskilled readers.

The most recent iteration of this expanding gulf between "saved" and "damned" is the anticipated imposition of a nationwide curriculum and assessment program in English Language Arts. While it is not my purpose here to argue the merits and drawbacks of the Common Core Standards on which this curriculum and assessment program will be based, it is my purpose to suggest the degree to which teaching to these standards is likely to increase the disparity between less able and more able readers. (see Diane Ravitch's blog post here for an early indicator of this increasing disparity). Fortunately, the Teachers College Reading and Writing Project website has provided us with a glimpse into the spring 2015 CCS assessments, from the perspective of the New York State students who took a pilot version this past spring (see here).

It is worth quoting the letter Lucy Calkins wrote as a preface to these observations:

"Dear Colleagues,
This site contains over 600 responses to the all-new, CCS-aligned ELA exam that Pearson gave this year in New York State. Given that Pearson is poised to compete with PARCC and Smarter Balanced as a provider of the new generation of national tests, I think you can look at these responses to Pearson's first iteration of that test as a harbinger of what is to come. What is to come, that is, unless someone calls out 'Wait! The Emperor has no clothes!'

The test was unlike anything anyone here had ever seen. I don't want to try to describe it to you, because frankly I wasn't allowed to see it. What I know about the test is largely harvested from these comments, and from people's descriptions of the test. And that, I think, is the problem. How can test-makers create a whole new generation of tests that we are not allowed to see, or to respond to in their first draft versions? How can legislators vote that teachers will be hired and fired based on this test, when they haven't watched their sons and daughters, grandchildren and neighbors, take the test?"

And one representative response from a California teacher:

"I am out in California and recently attended a CA Reading Association in San Diego and got to meet and talk with a Berkeley professor who was part of the team reviewing the "curriculum and testing" that will be presented in our state for Common Core implementation. He was very dismayed at the shallow interpretation of the Common Core and indeed at the creation of a curriculum at all. This opportunity to make millions is apparently being grabbed nationwide. So discouraging!!"
 Dee Roe - Teacher

What we are facing under the shadow of the seeming juggernaut of the national "Accountability Movement" is the prospect that both the curriculum we teach our students and the way they are assessed will be taken entirely out of our hands. Several comments on this Teachers College website speak about the misuse of the "Revised Publishers' Criteria" written by David Coleman and Susan Pimentel (see here) as a basis for creating these tests. But this is exactly what we should expect when the same for-profit companies that are creating curriculum aligned with the CCS are now major players in the creation of the tests themselves. The only change one might make to the observation above by California teacher Dee Roe is that the creation of our first-ever national curriculum and assessment program provides an opportunity for for-profit providers to make billions, not millions.

What is often overlooked in this heated climate is that the drive for accountability was itself based on a misleading interpretation of the international scores that supposedly placed American students near the bottom among post-industrialized nations in reading, science and math. Here is a useful interpretation of those scores, taken from an article in the January 2011 issue of Dissent magazine by Joanne Barkan (see here):

"Students in U.S. schools where the poverty rate was less than 10 percent ranked first in reading, first in science, and third in math. When the poverty rate was 10 percent to 25 percent, U.S. students still ranked first in reading and science. As the poverty rate rose still higher, however, students ranked lower and lower. 20% of all U.S. schools have poverty rates over 75%. The average ranking of American students reflects this. The problem is not public schools; it is poverty."

(see also Diane Ravitch's Reign of Error, chapter 10, entitled "How Poverty Affects Academic Achievement," for a particularly trenchant analysis of the connection between poverty and school achievement)

And in a somewhat more nuanced study in January of this year entitled "What do international tests really show about U.S. student performance?" economists Martin Carnoy and Richard Rothstein come to a similar conclusion:

"The share of disadvantaged students in the U.S. sample was the largest of any of the [post-industrial] countries we studied. Because test scores in every country are characterized by a social class gradient—students higher in the social class scale have better average achievement than students in the next lower class—U.S. student scores are lower on average simply because of our relatively disadvantaged social class composition. . . [I]f we make two reasonable adjustments to the reported U.S. average, our international ranking improves. The first adjustment re-weights the social class composition of U.S. test takers to the average composition of top-scoring countries. The other re-weights the distribution of lunch-eligible students by the actual intensity of such students in schools. These adjustments raise the U.S. international ranking on the 2009 PISA test from 14th to 6th in reading, and from 25th to 13th in mathematics. While there is still room for improvement, these are quite respectable showings"

To put it succinctly, the "achievement gap" between American students and their foreign counterparts is largely a red herring. While we've been sleeping, income inequality between the wealthy and everyone else has grown to proportions that presently exceed those of the "Gilded Age" of the late 19th and early 20th centuries (see Larry M. Bartels' sobering 2010 study of how this disparity has steadily grown, largely by conscious public policy under Republican presidents, since 1974; for a recent update, see Thomas Edsall's NYT Opinionator posting "Can the Govermnment Actually Do Anything About Inequality,"as well as the IRS study that documents the most recent "record" set by income inequality as reported in 2012 tax returns; and for a chillingly arresting YouTube video on this subject, see here). How likely is it that the imposition of a "rigorous" and "demanding" national curriculum and assessment system will significantly decrease the distance in school achievement between students from our poorest and wealthiest families? How much more likely is it that the results of these new assessments will once again mirror the income disparities we have grown all-too-accustomed to accepting?

In pondering these questions, I'm reminded of Tracy Kidder's moving portrait of Chris Zajac's 5th grade classroom in Among Schoolchildren (1990). In one of the most memorable moments in Kidder's narrative, he asks Zajac how much influence she thought she had over the lives and prospects of her lower class students in South Holyoke Massachusetts. "I'm like a small rock in a swiftly flowing steam," Zajac responds. "I can deflect the course of a number of my students' lives. I can't re-channel the stream."

I'd like to suggest setting the bar somewhat higher. In a workshop I've given over the past few years, prodded by Kelley Gallagher's documentation in Readicide (2009) of the alarming rise in the number of "aliterate" students (i.e. those who can read but choose not to) at the middle and high school levels, I introduce a variety of pre-reading strategies for the teaching of Harper Lee's To Kill a Mockingbird. Using a multi-modal approach that I believe holds the potential of re-engaging our most disengaged readers, I begin with vignettes from the novel based on the characters of Dill Harris, Mayella Ewell and Tom Robinson (see an earlier posting on this blogsite for a copy of these vignettes).

We start with the most traditional of exercises -- having participants read these short passages describing the characters of Dill, Mayella, and Tom, then writing about what they might understand about their assigned character, based on these passages. Rather than digging "deeper" into these complex texts, however, I return participants to the world of Disney by viewing the trial segment of the 1963 film version of Harper Lee's novel. Prior to viewing the film, I use a scaffolding strategy I call a cumulative graphic organizer, designed to help participants understand the roles played by these three different characters in relation to the larger world of Maycomb County.

Then I lead participants through a relaxation/guided imagery exercise in which they are "re-introduced" to their assigned character, followed by having them create visual symbol posters of that character. I follow this with a gallery walk of these visual symbol posters, followed by having them gather in mixed character groups of three, role-playing their assigned character as the other two members of the group ask questions. Finally, I return to the excerpts that were initially read in "Lutheran" fashion, silently at one's desk, at the beginning of the workshop, but this time listening to these excerpts from Sally Darling's excellent recording of the novel, while viewing them in enlarged print using a document camera. In conclusion, I ask participants to write about what they learned about their characters, and about themselves as learners, through the experience of this sequence of activities.

My point is to demonstrate that we can all deliberately and systematically draw on the various ways we know our kids are smart. That is, we can draw on their various talents as readers, listeners, responders to and shapers of their world. In doing so, we can not only speak out but "teach out" against practices and policies that we know are damaging our students, preventing them from experiencing themselves as the diversely talented group of individuals that, in our heart of hearts, we know them to be.

And in light of what is sure to be a tidal wave of curriculum materials purporting to "raise students' scores" on the spring 2015 CCS assessments, I propose the adoption of the following resolution:

WHEREAS every large scale study over the past 30 years of income level in relation to student achievement has shown a compelling correlation between the two, and

WHEREAS the percentage of students in poverty in our nation's schools has grown steadily and persistently over the past 39 years, and

WHEREAS the present levels of income inequality in our nation can be related directly to conscious public policy,


That the Common Core Standards, individual schools that "beat the odds," Teach for America Interns whose students outperform those of traditionally credentialed teachers, and all such examples of the need to "reform" the American system of public education, be understood for what they are:

Seductive distractions from the overriding issue we must face as a nation if "fixing" public schools is be anything more than an irresponsible instance of political posturing--the shameful growth in income disparity between our poorest and wealthiest citizens.

Sunday, April 21, 2013

Teaching Writing Grades 7-12 in an Era of Assessment: Passion and Practice

Table of Contents

I.   Passion and Practice: Personalizing the Theoretical – Jonathan Lovell
II.  Promoting the Passion: Teachers as Writers, Teachers as 
      Collaborators – Mary Warner
III. Building on the Formulaic: Into, Through, and Beyond
Part I: Moving Students Who Are Reluctant, Formula, or Personal Writers
“Into, Through, and Beyond” – Maria Clinton
Part II: Chunks, Scaffolds, and Names: A Pedagogy of Sentence-level Instruction
  --Martin Brandt
Part III: Using Nonfiction to Empower Students to Move Through and Beyond
                   Formula Writing – Brook Wallace
IV. Creative Reading in Support of Writing: Developing Meaningful 
       Response to Literature
Part I: Want to be a Better Writing Teacher? Then Take a Closer Look at How
                  You Teach Reading – Jay Richards
       Part II. Varying the Literature Circle Roles to Evoke Authentic Response
                   -- Brenna Dimas
       Part III: Independent Reading: To Read or Not to Read–No Longer a Dilemma
                   – Marie Milner
       Part IV: The Actual not the Virtual: the Power of the Book Pass to Engage Teen
                     Readers-- Mary Warner
V. Finding Your Writing Voice
        Part I: Using Readers’ Theatre to Hear the Voices in the Text -- Mary Warner
        Part II: Tapping the Voice of Middle School Students -- Kathleen Cohen
        Part III: “Make Music that Wasn’t There Before”: Modeling Voice with Mentor
                     Texts –- Marie Milner
VI. Bringing Passion to the Research Process: The I-Search Paper
         Part I: The Crittenden Middle School I-Search: Introducing Passion into
                    Research and Long-Term Project Planning -- Brandy Appling-Jenson
                    and Carolyn Anzia
         Part II: Demystifying the Research Process: The I-Search Paper -- Kathleen
VII. Expanding the Boundaries: The Uncharted Territory of Multigenre 
         Part I: Why Multigenre Writing Belongs in Middle School--Suzanne Murphy
         Part II: The Museum Exhibit --Maria Clinton
         Part III: Romeo and Juliet Brought to Life through Multigenre Strategies
                      --Marie Milner
VIII. Empowering English Language Learners: Moving toward 
          Competency as Speakers, Readers and Writers -- Marie Milner
IX. Practical Guidelines for Portfolios: Promoting Qualitative Assessment
       inTest-Prep Climate
          Part I:  The Case for Portfolio Practice with Middle School Students
                      --Suzanne Murphy and Amy Thompson
          Part II: The Portfolio Process in High School: Empowering Student
                        Participation in Learning -- Kathleen González
X.   Keeping Heart: Dealing with the Realities of the Paper Load 
       While Providing Authentic Response
          Part I:  TimeBusters!  Techniques for Saving Time When Grading
                      -- Kathleen Gonzalez
          Part II: Standards Based Grading – Maria Clinton

Intro for our Sept 25th Pearson Webinar on Implementing the ELA Common Core Standards:

What we intend to accomplish with our presentation is to place the middle and high school level Common Core Standards in English Language Arts within the context of “best practices” in the teaching of reading, writing, listening and speaking.

Each of the presenters you will be hearing from in this webinar will be talking about a specific practice, or a group of related practices, that they have discovered lead to significant growth in the language abilities of their students.  Not too surprisingly, these practices can be correlated quite convincingly with one or another of the “end point” Common Core standards we will using in the spring of 2015 to assess what students throughout the nation know and are able to do in the areas of reading, writing, speaking and listening.

It’s important to remember, however, that these standards are still essentially experimental.  They set the bar quite high for all students, but particularly for “high needs” students who do not start with the same advantages as their more affluent peers.  Whether or not it’s a good idea to set the bar at the same height for all students, regardless of their entry level skills and abilities, remains to be seen.  What we can say is that the national conversation we are likely to have quite soon on these issues is one that is long overdue, and the practices you will be introduced to today will be ones that all your students can benefit from, regardless of the eventual outcome of our current national fixation with the possibility of creating a curriculum and assessment system for every student based on the Common Core Standards.

So with that in mind, I'd like to say that on Wed Sept 25 from 3-4 pm Pacific Time, four of the authors of the Teaching Writing in an Era of Assessment:  Passion and Practice will lead a webinar on the teaching of reading, writing, listening and speaking in relation to the Common Core Standards
(http://pearsonpd.com/index.cfmlocator=PS2cY4&acornRdt=1&DCSext.w_psvaniturl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Epearsonpd%2Ecom%2FELA -- the webinar is the fourth item down from the top of the page).

The webinar will address two vital questions faced by all teachers of writing:

1) why might students wish to engage in the performative activity of writing?
2) why might they wish to do so not only with dogged persistence but with genuine passion?

Marty Brandt, high school English teacher in an urban setting, will describe the “chunks, scaffolds and names” that he developed to help his students his see the possibilities of writing rather than its limitations.  Using compelling examples of model sentences from a wide variety of sources, Marty will show how students can be led to understand how these sentences work, as well as how to use them effectively in their own writing.  How better to address Language Standard 3:  “Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening”?

Middle school English and Social Studies teacher Kathleen Danzey Cohen will describe how she capitalizes on her students’ unending propensity to chat, channeling this skill into narratives lush with description, dialogue and reflection. Her writing curriculum encourages students to create organized, detailed narratives filled with their own unique voices.  This curriculum encourages the improvement of student writing while addressing Listening and Speaking Standard 1:  “Prepare for and participate in a range of conversations and collaborations with diverse partners . . . and expressing their own [ideas] clearly and persuasively.”

The specific teaching strategies of Marty and Kathleen will be bracketed by Jonathan Lovell and Mary Warner.  Jonathan will discuss using Peter Elbow’s response groups to move students towards “clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience” (Writing Standard 5) and Ken Macrorie’s I-Search paper as a uniquely effective means for students to “gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and integrate [this] information while avoiding plagiarism” (Writing Standard 8).  Mary will demonstrate the importance of student voice, showing how the techniques of readers’ theatre can be employed with such “voice-filled” texts as Karen Hesse’s Witness to “evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of evidence and rhetoric” (Speaking and Listening Standard 3).  Like so many of the strategies described our book, Mary’s concluding contribution will reiterate how the language arts curriculum is significantly enhanced when each of its component parts—reading, writing, speaking and listening—serve to support one another.

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

writing and revelation

Writing and Revelation
Jonathan H. Lovell
Published in California English, May 2013

The small but heavy cardboard box had been opened, closed, and put aside--part of a larger project to plow through the accumulated debris of twenty-eight years of marriage. Its moving label read "Home Office. Books. His." My daughter Stephanie called me to ask if I might pick it up as part of my upcoming trip to Berkeley.  Why not?

Steph’s husband Mike, mindful of my weak lower back, hefted the box into the back of my car.  I'd had no occasion, therefore, to examine its contents until I arrived home later that afternoon and carefully set the unopened box down in the center of our living room rug.

The first items surprised and amused me:  the “subfusc” gown -- a black vest really -- that I was required to wear while attending tutorials at Oxford; an endearing picture of me at about age five; a somewhat disorienting picture of my father at a younger age, looking for all the world like a young girl; a college sweat shirt; my framed BA diploma.

Then came the books.  As soon as I saw the top one I knew exactly what they were.  The red cover with the words "poems," "ballads" and "sonnets." And then that oh so familiar frontispiece:  an oval lithograph of the poet, Dante Gabriel Rossetti, with his large expanse of forehead, short beard, and well trimmed mustache. His left hand holding a felt hat tipped provocatively "open" to the viewer; his right clutching his dun colored vest; those deeply inset dark eyes once again looking out menacingly at me.

I was back, almost instantly, to New Haven in the summer of 1979.  Rossetti's "Poems, Ballads and Sonnets" were sitting on my high drafting table. I was reading over a chapter of my dissertation that I'd written the previous summer.  Even with my kindest critical eye, I could tell it was painfully convoluted and overwrought:  a prime example of what Oxford's Dame Helen Gardner called the "lemon squeezer" school of literary criticism.

The house was quiet.  Stephanie and her mother were abroad on a fellowship-sponsored research trip to Paris and Venice.  My younger daughter was at a summer kindergarten program just a few blocks north from our downtown New Haven home.

My feeling in looking over my previous summer’s work, and reading over the poems that would serve as the focus of my next chapter, was of nausea.  Overwhelming nausea. As a poet and as a man, Rossetti was a difficult person to like.  He was self-absorbed, obsessive, demanding of others' attention, given to long bouts of depression.  To me, his poetry seemed to reflect these attributes: it had a hot-house quality that I found particularly distasteful, seeming to demand that the reader allow himself or herself to be drawn into the poet's lushly overwrought interior spaces.  I did not wish to be drawn into this world, either by Rossetti's poems or by his equally lush and overwrought paintings.  So what in the world was I doing writing a dissertation on this man’s poetry and paintings?

What compounded my problem, however, were the consequences of NOT finishing my dissertation.  I'd just finished my second year on the faculty at Teachers College, Columbia University's graduate school of education, and I loved what I was doing in my newly discovered field of English Education.  If I did not finish my dissertation this summer, or at the very least make significant progress on it, I could say goodbye to my Teachers College position, and for all I knew any future at all in higher education.

These problems were further complicated by my back and forth movement over the past two years between teaching English Education classes at Teachers College during the school year, then returning in the summer to the very different set of questions and problems posed by my sunken-eyed poet/painter.  How could I possibly find something worth writing about in the work of this somewhat marginal Victorian artist, especially when my heart was increasingly drawn to the compelling issues faced by public school English teachers at the middle and high school levels?

My day-to-day strategy for coping with my sense of growing anxiety was simple and satisfying.  As soon as I completed a page of writing, I'd go out and shoot hoops in our backyard.  I was getting some work done, very slowly, and my shooting percentage was improving significantly, but I could not help but feel the hoops were slowly gaining the upper hand.

I was spending one hot and muggy summer morning gazing out at my backyard, thinking that perhaps this morning the hoops might come before the writing, when I chanced to pick up a book I'd read, rather cursorily, a number of years earlier.  It was a study of Shelley's mythmaking, written by one of my teachers, Harold Bloom.  It had grown out of his own dissertation on this subject, also completed at Yale.  For some reason the passage that caught my eye was a discussion of Shelley's "To a Skylark."  I was familiar with its opening stanzas, as it was a favorite with anthologists of my parent's generation:

Hail to thee, blithe Spirit!
Bird thou never wert,
That from Heaven, or near it,
Pourest thy full heart
In profuse strains of unpremeditated art.

Higher still and higher
From the earth thou springest
Like a cloud of fire;
The blue deep thou wingest,
And singing still dost soar, and soaring ever singest.

It's vitally important, Bloom argued, that the distance between the poet-narrator and the skylark dramatically increases with each successive stanza.  In fact the bird has already soared so high before the poem begins that the poet can no longer see it.  He only hears its "profuse strains of unpremeditated art."  With each succeeding stanza, therefore, the poet must re-train his ear to detect the ever-receding melodies of the bird's unpremeditated song. To put it simply, the swiftly moving upward trajectory of the skylark, away from the narrator, is inextricably linked to the appeal of its "full hearted" song.

And to put my own response to Bloom's argument equally simply:  I'd never thought of looking at the role of the poet, or more generally of voice and inspiration, in quite this way.  That we start by hearing an already distant air, and as we strain to hear its glad-hearted melodies, it is already growing getting more and more distant from us, soaring away from us we labor to hear its song.  The speed of that skylark's flight, and the fact that it was flying upwards and away from the poet, even as the poet was attempting to capture and remember its song, presented a riveting and arresting picture for me of what Shelley was up to in many of his poems.

And then I realized, quite suddenly and with a degree of comprehension I find difficult to account for, that this was what Rossetti was up to in virtually all of his.

It was a single moment, really, and of course I went on to write and re-write many subsequent pages and chapters, and to shoot many hoops, before I completed my dissertation the following summer. But it's as if I'd been given an wholly unlooked for gift. As a result of this gift, I was able to see everything that in my previous study of my menacing-looking poet-painter had been vexing and harassing in an entirely new light.  I experienced the writing of my final chapters as something pleasurable, something I looked forward to, something that I knew I could do with integrity and even with occasional insight.

So what might we make of this story of writing and revelation, of perseverance well beyond the bounds of logic or probable success?  I would suggest the following moral.  That what we experience when we write is quite like listening for the full-throated, glad-hearted sound of that skylark.  As I've discovered from co-directing a great many Writing Project summer institutes, and being a full participant in two, we start by hearing only the dimmest whisperings of our colleagues' and our own voices.  But with a day-by-day training of our ears, and a growing faith that each of our colleagues, and ourselves, do indeed have voices to be heard, we begin to hear them.  And it's this very faith that helps to transform the hesitant murmurs of those initial days into the full-throated roar of the final days of a summer institute.

We are now at a point in the evolution of the seventeen sites of the California Writing Project where continued funding of these invaluable and inspiriting summer institutes, each costing 40K per summer to run at their maximum level of effectiveness, has been put in jeopardy.  This has resulted largely from the decision three years ago by the US Department of Education under Arne Duncan to “zero out” ongoing funding for all categorical educational programs, including the National Writing Project.  Given the central importance of these intensive summer programs to the vitality and consequentiality of the California Writing Project—certainly one of the most influential professional development programs in the teaching of writing in our lifetime—I believe it is essential for us to act now to prevent these often life-changing summer institutes from continuing their seemingly implacable downward trajectory.  Without such action, these pearls of professional development will surely slip, almost without our notice, slowly and quietly into this good night.

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

passion & practice to be published!

Teaching Writing Grades 7-12 in an Era of Assessment:  Passion and Practice has just been published.  I have an hard copy in my hands I re-write these introductory remarks.  Quite exciting!  Pearson gave us the go-ahead to go into production in mid-fall 2012, with the book scheduled for publication  (correctly, as it turned out) on August 30, 2013.  Here's my own initial chapter:

Chapter 1

Passion and Practice: Personalizing the Theoretical*
by Jonathan Lovell


In introducing Teaching Writing Grades 7–12 in an Era of Assessment: Passion
and Practice with attention to the theorists and theorist-practitioners who served as
pioneering founders, my goals are twofold. The first is to demonstrate the practical
but profound influence of these founders on our practices as teachers of writing
today, especially in light of the emphasis on writing found in the Common Core
State Standards. The second is toput some flesh on the bones of these seminal
thinkers, showing how what they wrote was deeply enmeshed in what they did
as practitioners themselves. As Malcolm Gladwell (Outliers: The Story of Success,
2008) and Howard Gardner (The Disciplined Mind: What All Students Should
Understand, 1999) have helped us to understand, excellence in performing any
activity is dependent on a willingness to perform this activity over and over again.

The question for the authors discussed in this opening chapter is the question
all teachers confront, however much they believe in the essential nature of
repeated practice in relation to performance excellence: why might my students
wish to engage in the performative activity of writing? And why might they
wish to engage in this practice with not just dogged persistence, but with
genuine passion?

For readers of this book not fortunate enough to be familiar with the work 
of these founders, my hope is that my accounts will serve as a direct and
memorable avenue to understanding them. It is especially important that
this act of tough-minded homage be done during this “era of assessment,”
since the broad, comprehensive, and inspiriting view of language growth
espoused by these founders is presently in danger of being marginalized
or simply forgotten. While each account is embedded in a personal narrative, 
the events I relate are similar to those experienced by any teacher who confronts
challenges in his or her teaching, but is fortunate enough to be introduced to
new perspectives that transform his or her understanding of what students can
accomplish in their writing. While the teacher-authors represented in this book
reflect the direct influence of these theorists only occasionally, these seminal
thinkers contributed significantly to my own shaping of the San Jose Area
Writing Project’s Invitational Summer Institutes. It is these summer programs,
in turn, that provided such fertile ground for the rethinking of practices in the 
teaching of writing that you will reading about in the chapters that follow.

James Britten and the Value of “Expressive” Language

In 1969, in my second and final year of study at Oxford University, I happened 
to find a recently published paperback entitled Language, the Learner and the 
School by Douglas Barnes, James Britton, and Harold Rosen, all of the London
Institute of Education. What help might this publication provide, I wondered, for
a position I’d soon be assuming teaching English to 10th and 12th graders at an
independent day school in Wilmington, Delaware?

The perspective these researchers brought to their study was intriguing. What 
happens, they asked, when students move from being taught by a single primary
grade teacher to the six or seven different teachers of their subject-centered
secondary classrooms?  In asking this question, these researchers brought to
their observations a point of viewthat sounds strikingly contemporary: how do
students at the middle and high school levels come to understand the often quite
different “academic languages” used by their different subject area teachers? And
how does the language these different teachers use to describe and explain their
different subject areas compare and contrast to the language the students themselves
might use to explain what they already know and what they are in the process of

What gave particular resonance to the work of this group, however, in contrast to
the focus today on having teachers gradually lead their students to an increasing 
sense of command of the academic language of their respective disciples, was
the respect they had for how students expressed themselves when they met in
small groups to discuss what they were learning, independent of a teacher’s
guidance. I was sufficiently intrigued by the contrasts between the “expressive”
language the seventh grade students in the study used to convey their under-
standing of what they had learned and the academic language used by their
secondary level teachers that I vowed to conduct my own small classroom
experiment when I began my teaching. Rather than tell students what I thought
they should notice about the short stories we were reading for our 10th
grade curricula, I would take out my notepad and write down what they said.
And I was prepared to wait quite a long time, in silence, before I said anything
myself. Otherwise, so I reasoned, I could not be sure if what I was listening to
was my students’ own “expressive” language or their desire to sound as much
as possible like their teacher.

It turned out that my students did have to endure quite long spells of silence 
in those first few weeks of my teaching, and I’m not certain that I made very
productive or beneficial use of the student-centered language that I learned
as a result. What I did learn was that the majority of the students I taught
were simply not very interested in talking about short works of fiction that
had been “pre-packaged” by a publisher who cared little about what interested
them, and who marched them doggedly through groups of stories according
to what these works of fiction revealed about the salient characteristics of the 
short story genre. In other words, it did not matter if I did not say a thing, since
the organization and academic focus of the anthology we were using spoke
volumes “on my behalf.” 

While I gradually abandoned my experimental role as an observer and recorder of 
my students’ responses to the short stories they were reading, I did not forget the 
impact that reading those initial research studies had had on me as an eager and
expectant young English teacher. When I returned eight years later to the work of
this group of researchers, their writing had become much better known, both in
England and the United States. In response to the influential teaching and writing
of James Britton, author of Language and Learning (1970), the world of English
Education that I re-entered in the fall of 1977 was abuzz with discussions of
“expressive writing,” writing-across-the-curriculum, and the development of writing
abilities from the early to the later teenage years.

In my position at Columbia University’s Teachers College for which I’d been hired,
my job was to organize an MA program in English Education for prospective 
secondary level teachers and create new EdD and PhD programs in the teaching of
reading and writing. I was qualified, however, for neither of these roles, having
managed to get through my interview by doing some quick research in the field of
composition studies and somehow managing to persuade my interviewers that I
knew what I was talking about. When the spring semester came around, however,
I was in deep trouble. I was responsible for teaching a course entitled "Composition
for Teachers of English," with my audience composed of the dozen or so MA
students I had begun to work with that fall as well as about 30 New York City
high school English teachers who were taking the course to move up a notch on
their salary scales.

What made teaching this course especially troubling for me, however, was my 
own writing. I was trying to complete the second chapter of my dissertation—a
study of the work of the Pre-Raphaelite poet and painter Dante Gabriel Rossetti—
but what I was in fact doing was crossing out sentences and paragraphs I’d written
months earlier and feeling like I was sinking slowly and inexorably into an ever-
deepening verbal morass. What I really needed to do, I remember thinking, was
re-title my course "De-composition for Teachers of English." That was a subject
I knew something about.

I managed to make it through the first few Monday evening classes. Following the
graduate school model with which I was most recently familiar, I lectured to the 
class on the research by Douglas Barnes, James Britton, and Harold Rosen that I
described previously. As this research evolved in the late 1960s and early 1970s,
it paid increasing attention to the disconnect between the “expressive language”
students might use to convey their initial responses to what they read, and the
overly dry, academic language they were required to use in their writing, especially
as they moved from 7th to 12th grades.

Peter Elbow and the Value of Respectful Listeners

While this research was indeed quite important, the lecture-discussion style in which 
I presented it to my class was a disaster: a modeling of just the sort of dry academic
language that Britton, Barnes, and Rosen were arguing against. Just how disastrous
was revealed to me by a note my chair left on my desk a few weeks into the semester.
“I thought I’d better pass along this letter written to President Cremin of Teachers
College,” it read. “I wouldn’t take it too seriously, but it does suggest problems that
might be worth addressing.” A student in my class who was teaching at the innova-
tive private day school to which President Cremin had sent his own children wrote
the letter. In the letter, she referred to a lecture that Cremin had recently given on the
need to bring a greater sense of professionalism to teachers at the K–12 level. An
excellent way to start in this direction, she suggested, would be to fire a recently
hired assistant professor teaching a course entitled "Composition for Teachers
of English."

As I was sitting disconsolately at my desk, expecting to find my belongings uncere-
moniously dumped onto the street at any moment, two of my graduate students
walked into my office. “We heard you were having some trouble with that course
in the teaching of writing,” they told me. “We thought you might find this book
helpful. We use it in our CUNY basic writing courses and find the practices it
recommends work very well.”

The book was Writing Without Teachers (1973) by Peter Elbow. I figured at that 
point I had nothing to lose, so I began reading. What immediately drew me in was
Elbow’s account of himself as a writer. He’d had more and more trouble with his
own writing as he progressed from college to graduate school and had become
hopelessly stuck in the writing of his own dissertation. Since his inability to write
disqualified him from any potential job he might get teaching English Literature at
the college level, the only job he was qualified for, ironically, was as an instructor
of freshman composition.

Elbow did more than write about his own travails as a writer, however. More use-
fully, he outlined a program for addressing the deep-seated doubts and failures of
nerve and confidence that he suggested we all face as writers, no matter our age or
grade level. Try writing in short bursts, Elbow suggested, not letting your “editorial
mind” prematurely censure what you’ve written. Try writing these short bursts at
unusual times of day or in inconvenient places. I came to call this approach “Writ-
ing in difficult circumstances,” and often practiced it by writing before I’d had my
morning coffee or on the New York City subway as it lurched its way from station
to station.

The most distinctive and important component of Elbow’s approach, however, is 
his insight into the importance of getting response to one’s writing. Just as the in-
ternal editor in our mind tends to censure our work prematurely, so do those who
respond to our writing. And yet getting response is crucial to discovering what we
have to say. Therefore, Elbow suggested that rather than reading a writer’s initial
drafts silently, authors should read their writing aloud to a small group of listeners:
once through a first time so listeners gain a sense of the content of the writing, then
a second time so they gain a sense of its emerging shape. Elbow further argued,
quite surprisingly and innovatively, that rather than having listeners suggest revisions
to the writer, they should describe the effect of hearing the author’s words read aloud.

Listeners would begin by recalling words and phrases they’d remembered from the 
piece, then they would summarize the piece as a whole, and finally they would tell 
the author what hearing the piece read aloud led them to think about as they were 
listening to it. These “showing,” “telling,” and “generative” responses should be 
written out by the listeners, Elbow suggested, then read aloud and handed to the 
authors who had their pieces responded to in this objective fashion. In this way, 
authors themselves could decide how to revise their writing so that it produced the 
desired effects on listeners, or effects that they admired in other pieces they’d heard 
in their small groups of writers and listeners.

I was fascinated. I decided to put Elbow’s approach to the test, producing a “compo-
sition manifesto,” as my students came to call it, for the next class. “We will write 
each week,” I announced, “including your instructor.” And I went on to explain 
that we would form small groups of five or six, read our pieces of writing aloud to 
one another, respond in the ways I’d just learned from reading this compelling new 
book, and document what happened to us and to our writing as we went through 
this process.

And for those in the class that chose to stick it out, our writing—and more impor-
tantly, our appetite for producing and revising our writing—did indeed improve: 
steadily, obviously, and often quite dramatically. I later came to see that what Elbow 
was proposing was the creation of a community of respectful and skilled listener-
readers as much as confident and competent writers. That’s what these elaborate 
rituals of response were all about: gaining steady and consistent practice in learning 
to become attentive and respectful listeners. And in the process of becoming these 
listener-readers, writing is “brought out” of us that responds directly to, and is in a 
sense the creation of, this new community of writers and listeners. One of Elbow’s 
most enduring legacies is that most 21st century K–12 teachers have come through 
college composition classes where peer response groups are the norm.

Lucy Calkins and the Value of Writer’s Workshop

Four years later, in response to a position my wife was offered at UC Berkeley, 
I left  my tenure track position at Columbia and assumed a one-year renewable
position at  UC Davis teaching freshman composition. At Davis, I was one of
40-odd composition instructors. Some were graduate students in English, some
were Davis residents, and a few like me were PhDs in English looking for full-
time tenure track positions elsewhere. Everyone taught the same course, using a
session-by-session instruction manual based on Frederick Crews’ Random House
Handbook of Rhetoric and Composition.

My students at Davis were quite different from those I’d taught at Columbia. 
Products of California’s affluent and protected suburbs, they treated composition
instructors as service providers whose main purpose was to ensure that they, the
service recipients, maintained their 4.0 GPAs. “What must we do on this compar-
ison/contrast paper to get an A?” they would ask. Or “Could you tell us exactly
what you want on this descriptive writing assignment?”

They’d arrive at my office door, graded papers in hand, asking me to show them 
which words, phrases, and commas they should change to upgrade their paper from
a B+ to an A. Soon, they were coming up to me as I walked into class, asking me
with an edge to their voices if I might “make the next assignment clearer,” so they
would “know what I wanted” and could “give it to me.” I knew exactly what I
wanted. I wanted to shake my students by their shoulders until their collective teeth
rattled, saying to them: “Write about something that matters to you, or I will go
completely bonkers!”

I recall driving to Davis one morning, numb with apprehension, with a pile of 30 
“classification” papers sitting expectantly on the passenger seat beside me. In these 
papers my students had been asked to “select a generic group of things and describe 
the features that distinguish the sub-categories that make up this group.” Although 
I’d skimmed these papers the night before, I now had to re-read and grade them
before my first morning class. As I sat at the table of the lab classroom I’d been
assigned, working doggedly to complete this task, it seemed to me that every single
paper described the bicycles ridden on the Davis campus and the various sub-
categories into which these bicycles might be classified. “What should we do,
Professor, to get an A on this paper?” “Write about something that matters to me,”
I wanted to shout, “or I assure you I will start swinging from the trees outside our
classroom windows and loping across campus on my legs and forepaws.”

I was in the middle of my first semester, my desk at home littered with piles of 
composition assignments I could not bear to look at, when I received a call from my
former department chair at Teachers College. Because our decision to move to
California was made quite late in the prior semester, my chair had decided to leave
my position vacant for a year so that a departmental committee could conduct a
proper search for my replacement. “We have an interesting candidate for your
English Education position,” my chairman said. “I wonder if you could help us out.”
He explained that while the candidate’s research had been in the general field of
English Education, she’d focused her studies on upper elementary level students.
“But it’s first-rate stuff,” my chairman said, “really first rate. Could you give this
candidate a call, perhaps have her send you her current work-in-progress, and write
an evaluation to the search committee of her appropriateness for the position?”
“Glad to,” I replied, trying to sound more confident than I felt. “Do you want me to
be an advocate for the position as well? I would suspect she’s being courted by
other universities.” My chairman replied that he’d be pleased if I would, describing
the candidate as a “rare find.”

I called her the following weekend, and when she asked if Columbia usually called 
candidates as parts of their searches, I told her that hers was an unusual case.
“‘Unusual’ good or ‘unusual’ bad?” she asked me. “‘Unusual’ good,” I said,
mentioning my chair’s reference to her as a “rare find.” “How would he know?
What’s he read of mine he likes so much?” This is more difficult than I’d
anticipated, I thought to myself. I  wonder what she has written? So I asked her
about her research.

The manuscript arrived a week later: 300 pages wrapped in brown paper. I started 
reading immediately. The content drew me in at once. Here were third and fourth 
graders writing exactly as I wanted my college freshmen to write: choosing topics 
of consequence to them; experimenting with different modes of writing—narrative, 
poetry, drama—and getting thoughtful and respectful feedback on their pieces from 
their teachers and fellow classmates. And the writing that the students in these class-
rooms produced was absolutely stunning. Several years later, I used the book that 
emerged from this dissertation, Lessons From a Child (1983), as one of the textbooks 
for a college level writing course I was teaching. One of my students in that course 
came into my office shortly after the class had begun, asking anxiously, “You don’t
expect us to write as well as the kids in this book, do you?”

The author of that small but seminal volume, Lessons From a Child, was Lucy 
Calkins. I wrote an enthusiastic review of her candidacy for my former department,
which I first showed to my then middle school-aged daughter. “It’s well written,
Dad,” she remarked, “but this person does walk on the ground like the rest of us,
doesn’t she?”  As it turned out, she was selected for the position at Teachers College,
where she is still teaching. Having written, among many other publications, the highly
successful K-2 and 3-5 Units of Study for the teaching of writing and Pathways to 
the Common Core: Accelerating Achievement (2012), and having directed the
influential Teachers College Reading and Writing Project over many years, it’s now
clear that she does indeed walk on the ground like the rest of us, only more sure-
footedly and quite a bit faster.

Donald Graves and the Value of Learning From Our Youngest Writers

In the spring of 1982, however, the University of New Hampshire group through which Lucy Calkins was introduced to the field of composition research was just starting to gain attention. Its leader, Donald Graves, was known at the time primarily through his authorship of the Ford Foundation monograph Balance the Basics: Let Them Write (1978). In this powerful study, Graves pointed out that for every dollar spent on the teaching of writing, one hundred dollars are spent on the teaching of reading. Even more tellingly, he noted that for every dollar spent for research on the teaching of writing, one thousand are spent for research on the teaching of reading. His conclusion was that by not taking advantage of a child’s initial urge to write rather than to read, we significantly underestimate the power of the “output languages” of writing and speaking in favor of the “input languages” of reading and listening.

This monograph, along with the fact that Graves was receiving the David H. Russell Research Award for authoring this study and concurrently publishing his seminal work Writing: Teachers and Children at Work (1983), was creating quite a stir in the hallways and sessions of the 1982 NCTE Annual Convention in Washington, DC. As a rather wide-eyed attendee at this conference, I was greatly impressed with the energetic and dedicated cadre of young scholars that Don Graves had drawn into his orbit: Lucy Calkins of Teachers College (discussed earlier in this chapter), Nancie Atwell of Boothbay Harbor, Maine (soon to publish In the Middle: Writing, Reading, and Learning with Adolescents in 1987), Mary Ellen Giacobbe of Atkinson, New Hampshire (later to publish Talking, Drawing, Writing: Lessons for Our Youngest Writers in 2007), Linda Rief of Durham, New Hampshire (later to publish Seeking Diversity: Language Arts with Adolescents in 1992), and Tom Romano of Edgewood High School in Trenton, Ohio (soon to publish Clearing the Way: Working with Teenage Writers in 1987). 

But I was also impressed with the fundamentally important perception about language growth on which much of the research and practice of this University of New Hampshire group was based. This perception might be expressed by observing that while most parents would never dream of putting their hands over their children’s mouths if they uttered the words “mama” or “papa,” telling them instead not to speak until they could say the words “mother” or “father,” something analogous was happening quite routinely in the teaching of writing in our nation’s elementary school classrooms. Rather than recognizing and honoring children’s desire to write, as well as their confidence that they had something important to say, and rather than learning the predictable patterns of “invented spelling” that young children routinely use when they begin to write, teachers were closing the door on these nascent efforts at written communication, focusing their attention instead on handwriting, spelling, and the basic punctuation conventions of simple sentences. By imposing this adult perception of the “fundamentals” of written communication prematurely, teachers were unwittingly creating a nation of students who either hated to write or were convinced that they were “horrible writers.” It was just as if parents had indeed put their hands over their children’s mouths when they began to speak, with the analogous result that we were raising a nation of children who were being essentially chastened into silence.

That’s effectively what we’d done in our practices in the teaching of writing, specifically in this era of ever-increasing high-profile assessments. Rather than capitalize on the simplicity and depth of Graves’ innovative understanding of how students might grow as writers and how we might assist them more humanely and productively in our practices as teachers, we have been increasingly focused on testing that segments writing into component parts, and in the process largely destroys our students’ urge or desire to write.

James Gray and the Value of Writing Teachers Collaborating Across All Grade Levels

A few months after meeting Don Graves and his impressive cadre of young teacher-
researchers, I assumed a position in English Education at the Reno campus of the
University of Nevada. One of my new position’s job requirements was that I
collaborate with a group of K–12 teachers who formed a professional development
communityknown as the Northern Nevada Writing Project. While I had some
familiarity with the Writing Project through my collaboration with Sondra Perl
and Richard Sterling, the New York City Writing Project Directors, during my
time at Teachers College, my experience was still quite limited.

As part of my new position however, I was fortunate enough to be asked by the two 
co-directors of the Northern Nevada Writing Project (both high school teachers) to 
apply to the Bay Area Writing Project’s Invitational Summer Institute. I spent over 
four-and-a-half weeks during the summer of 1984 in the company of 25 other 
K–college teachers on the UC Berkeley campus, under the direction of Jim Gray,
founder of the Writing Project. Having now served as a director or co-director of
28 subsequent invitational summer institutes, it seems clear to me that there is a
compelling connection between the inspiration for attending to younger students’
beginning writing development among the researchers at the University of New
Hampshire and the concurrent founding of the Bay Area Writing Project at the
University of California at Berkeley in the mid-1970s.

Both the University of New Hampshire program under Don Graves and the Univ-
ersity of California Berkeley/Bay Area Writing Project program under Jim Gray 
began with the perception that there were talents and abilities among their target 
populations that had gone largely unnoticed because these quite different popula-
tions had not been given the opportunity to “see” the emergence of their own
abilities in a concrete and convincing manner. In the case of young children, this
was largely because most teachers believed that several small “steps” needed to be
mastered before younger writers could “walk” with confidence as mature writers.
In the case of practicing teachers, the worker-supervisor model under which the field
of public school teaching continues to function today made it all but certain that
administrators would fail to see their “teacher-workers” as valuable and insightful
sources of knowledge. Looked at from this perspective, neither the young writers
in Don Graves’ initial studies of elementary school children in Atkinson, New
Hampshire, nor the mostly middle and high school teachers who made up the Bay
Area Writing Project’s initial 1974 Invitational Summer Institute were accustomed
to being heard or listened to with the idea that they had something important to say,
something important to teach the rest of us.

In the University of New Hampshire research studies, what gives young writers the 
confidence they have something to say is the time and the patience their teachers 
provide for them to think through, draft, and revise their writing. In the Writing 
Project Summer Institutes, what builds this confidence in having something worth-
while to say is the evenly allocated time that every participant is given to present 
a workshop demonstration of a “best practice” in the teaching of writing to the other
participants in the institute. Both practices accomplish similar goals. They begin with
individuals who are uncertain or deeply skeptical that their “words” are worth
listening to, and they provide these individuals with an attentive and respectful
audience that helps to bring forth the very “words of consequence” that the young
writers or selected teachers are half-convinced they do not possess.

It is no accident that both programs came around to a belief in the fundamental 
importance of teachers as writers. The forerunner to the Writing Project, as Jim Gray
explains in Teachers at the Center (2000), led to the somewhat accidental creation
of “afternoon writing groups” in which small groups of teachers write and get
response to their writing. This now-standard feature of all Writing Project Summer
Institutes was an unanticipated outcome (one which evolved during the pre-1974
years when Gray’s summer programs were located on the UC Davis campus and
were NDEA funded) of several high school teachers’ desire to “try out” some of the
practices in the teaching of writing that had been presented during the morning
sessions. Similarly, it was only in his later writings that Don Graves began to
understand the importance of teachers consistently bringing their own experience
as writers to their conferences and mini-lessons with their students. A major legacy,
then, of Don Graves and Jim Gray is this focus on teachers as writers.

Don Murray and the Value of Attending to the Practice of Professional Writers

I read Don Murray’s A Writer Teaches Writing: A Practical Method of Teaching Composition (1968), along with Janet Emig’s The Composing Processes of Twelfth Graders (1971), in preparation for my interview for the English Education position at Teachers College. What struck me in Murray’s accounts of his own practices as a writer was how authentic and (not infrequently) moving they sounded. His words fairly leapt off the page, and it was clear to me that the urgency and vitality of what he had to say were directly related to the honesty with which he described, and often dissected, his own practices as he moved slowly and often painfully from initial draft to final product. The “lesson” conveyed by Murray’s book is twofold: writing is far more messy and labor-intensive than had been generally acknowledged by traditional approaches to the teaching of writing, and the most convincing and heartfelt instruction in this field of endeavor would come from someone who was himself or herself a passionate practitioner.

It was Murray’s call to arms in this respect that led me to insist, in my “composition manifesto” to my Teachers College students, that we would all write, “including your instructor,” and that we would reflect on what we’d learned about our own writing in relation to our teaching of writing, as we progressed from draft to draft on our various pieces of writing. And it’s Murray’s message that reverberates in my mind today as I ask the participants in our San José Area Writing Project Summer Institutes to use their end-of-institute evaluations to describe their experiences with their afternoon writing response groups and to reflect on what they will take from these experiences to their classrooms in the coming year. Two of the participants’ responses from our 2011 summer institute indicate the power of the connection that teachers begin to make once they see themselves as writers teaching

     "After we settled down and got a chance to get to know one another, we got 
      along great. We discussed how we wanted feedback. Some wanted 50%
      positive / 50% constructive; another wanted it “ruthless”; another only wanted
      us to tell her she was a good writer. So we settled on 50/50 and nothing mean.
      It was healthy to compromise. After we read one another’s work aloud, passed
      it around, commented, made changes, brought it back—rinse, wash, repeat—
      we were all so much closer. We saw improvements and wonderful work come 
     from places we didn’t even know existed. It was amazing. I hope to create and 
     foster the use of writing groups in my own classes this coming year because I
     feel it was such a valuable experience for finding out that I was a writer.
     Correction—that I am a writer. I have rekindled something long shoved off
     as youthful pretentiousness. I believe that if I can create a safe enough space
     within small groups, I can create a safer space in the whole classroom."
    — Melissa M, 11th–12th Grade Teacher

    "My experience with my afternoon writing group was very cathartic. We 
     would meet after each morning session and debrief everything. Most of
     our afternoons were spent talking and reminiscing. After writing and reading
     so much, but having little time to comment . . . most of us were bursting at
     the seams to share . . . anything and everything. We found ourselves sharing
     stories, life experiences, quotes, comments, concerns, etc. We would jot down
     ideas, etc. then parade home with “homework” and writing assignments. It
     turned out that this was what led to the majority of the creative spark for me.
    I would take most of this home, let it percolate, and then start my actual writing
    around 10 pm or so. I think the biggest experiences I will take to my classroom
    for this coming year are the options that were provided by our Afternoon Writing
    Group facilitator and the fact that, sometimes, you just have to talk about things
    before you write. Sometimes I assign things without talking through them. I think
    it would help to allow students to sit in writing groups of about 3 or 4 to bounce
    ideas off one another before they start writing. This could help get their creative
    spark lit."
    —Katie N, 9th–10th Grade Teacher

Both of these responses demonstrate the significance of Don Murray’s insistence that 
teachers of writing not only “talk the talk” but also “walk the walk.” As we face the
predictable onslaught of “hard-wired” approaches to the teaching of writing in our
public school classrooms in the name of aligning our curricula to the Common Core
State Standards, it is helpful to remember Don Murray’s frequent admonition that
creating writing worth reading involves a process that is by nature messy, unpredic-
table, and idiosyncratic.

Ken Macrorie and the Value of Bringing Voice to Research

If Don Murray represents the typical New Englander in his dedication to a strong 
work ethic shading toward dogged persistence, Ken Macrorie represents the
irreverence of the typical westerner. He never met a grammar rule he didn’t like . . .
to break. Born in the Mississippi River town of Moline, Illinois, Macrorie
frequently evokes, both in his stance toward writing and in his own writing
voice, the spirit and voice of Mark Twain: “Persons attempting to find a motive
in this narrative will be prosecuted; persons attempting to find a moral in it will
be banished; persons attempting to find a plot in it will be shot. By Order
of the Author” (preface to The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn). 

It therefore comes as something of a surprise that Macrorie was a good deal more 
involved than Murray, five years his junior, in working within traditional organiza-
tions in the field of English Education. He was a Professor of English at Western 
Michigan University from 1961 to 1978, where his focus was on teacher training 
(or “re-educating teachers trapped in unproductive teaching methods,” as he put it). 
He served as editor of NCTE’s professional journal, College Composition and 
Communication, from 1962 to 1964, when it was regarded as the leader of the 
assault on the “current traditional” paradigm in writing instruction. And finally, 
he served for 13 years, both before and after his retirement from WMU, at the
Bread Loaf Graduate School of English, a summer master’s program conducted
under the auspices of Vermont’s Middlebury College, where he taught practicing
high school teachers to become writers and to take that knowledge back to their

In terms of this chapter, however, it is Macrorie’s re-conceptualizing of the writing 
of the traditional research paper that will illuminate his many contributions to the 
field of writing instruction. The book that introduced many to Macrorie’s boldly 
original reconsideration of research writing was Searching Writing (1980), or as the 
book was more helpfully re-titled in 1988, The I-Search Paper. In Chapter 6 of this 
book, you will read how middle school teachers Brandy Appling-Jenson and Carolyn 
Anzia, as well as high school teacher Kathleen González, have adapted Macrorie’s 
I-Search Paper strategies for their own classrooms. In this chapter, however, I focus 
on the impact Macrorie’s original text had on my teaching of freshman composition 
classes at San José State University. 

Like most college level freshman composition programs, San José State requires the 
completion of a “research paper” as part of every student’s introductory level writing 
requirements. On the one hand, I understood the rationale for this requirement, since 
such “academic” writing would be routinely required of students as they moved to 
higher-level university classes. On the other hand, I was all too aware of the pull my 
students would feel toward simply “lifting” their material from previously published 
sources. I was not unsympathetic to this pull. It’s one we have all felt to one degree 
or another, after all, and it’s especially understandable when beginning level college 
writers are placed in academic environments where they have very little notion of 
what constitutes authentically compelling academic writing.

This is where Macrorie’s understanding of what it means to search, whether for an
obscure bit of evidence that might illuminate a larger academic argument or for
something as relatively mundane as the best price on a car stereo system, comes
to the fore. I can’t recall if Macrorie also suggested a  gallery walk to heighten
interest in these initial searches, but that’s what I did with my San José State
freshman classes. Everyone wrote down his or her research question on a large
piece of poster paper (with one nervy freshman writing in his, “What is the meaning
of life?”) and then everyone in the class did a gallery walk past these posters, writing
graffiti-like comments on these easel sheets if one knew something about the content
of the search or if one had a suggestion for the author about how he or she might
pursue the search.

The next steps were to “research one’s topic” and to keep a running record of the 
steps one took to move closer to discovering answers to his or her research question. 
At least one interview with one informant was required for the search, and I custom-
arily prepared for these by setting a question for the class as a whole and then bring-
ing in an informant that the class could collectively interview. A further requirement 
was for a “saturation report,” where the researcher would describe a setting that had 
come to be significant in his or her search. As with the whole-class interviews, I 
would generally take the class on a short “field trip” around the building in which the 
class was being held. Then I would ask everyone to select a setting they found mem-
orable and describe that setting in a way the rest of the class might recognize.

The culmination of the I-Search paper was for students to write a narration of their 
pursuit of their question. They would start with what they knew or didn’t know 
about their topic, follow this with an “argument” that explained to their readers why
 the question they were pursuing was important to them, document the steps they 
took to learn the answer(s) to their question, and conclude with a summary of what 
they had learned by the time “the whistle blew” and they had to end their search. 
Needless to say, issues with plagiarism were simply non-existent with such a rich 
and compelling experience of “researching” a question of one’s own choosing. 

What surprised me, however, was the vibrancy and liveliness of my students’ voices 
in the papers they submitted. I sent a batch of these papers to Macrorie himself, then 
living in retirement in Las Cruces, New Mexico. He wrote back a few months later, 
explaining that it took him some time to read through what I’d sent him and asking 
me to please send less next time. While he complained that he could not fully under-
stand how my students managed to survive my “barrage” of instructions (a “running 
syllabus” I provided for my students, made up of single-spaced narratives describing 
each successive class), the papers they wrote clearly demonstrated that I must be 
doing something right. “They are a delight,” he wrote. “So loose in the saddle, so 
lively, so uncluttered with the usual hogwash of freshman compositions.” I could 
hardly have asked for a more satisfying recognition of my students’ writing abilities, 
nor a more compelling argument for the value of re-conceiving the research paper
as an authentic quest, placing the student writer at its center.

James Moffett and the Value of the “Ladder of Abstraction”

In focusing on James Moffett’s contributions to the field of composition instruction, 
I return to my early days teaching 10th grade in Wilmington, Delaware, then fast-
forward to my final two years teaching Composition for Teachers of English at 
Teachers College. My purpose in doing so is to illustrate the profound influence 
that the theorists discussed in this chapter have had, and continue to have, on the 
practice of writing at all levels, and also to illustrate how these theories might be 
practically applied in actual, concrete teaching situations.

In my teaching in Wilmington, I enjoyed and was stimulated by teaching my 12th 
graders, but it was my 10th graders I truly loved. They were at such a volatile and 
important stage in their intellectual and emotional development, and I came to 
believe that if I taught wisely I could make a significant difference in their lives.
What was at issue, to my mind, was whether or not I could persuade my 10th
graders to entertain more than one point of view on a given subject. What frustrated
me in trying to come up with teaching practices that would serve to jostle my 10th
graders from their often quite strong allegiance to a predetermined position was the
pervasive influence of the five-paragraph theme. As described by Janet Emig in
The Composing Processes of Twelfth Graders (1971), the “Fifty-Star Theme,”
as Emig nicknamed the five-paragraph theme, was both frustratingly persistent
in the secondary level English language arts curriculum and wholly unrelated to 
any real purpose or practice in the larger world:

     "Why is the Fifty-Star Theme so tightly lodged in the American compo-
     sition curriculum? The reason teachers often give is that this essentially
     redundant form, devoid of content in at least two of its five parts, exists
     outside their classrooms, and in very high places—freshman English classes,
     business communication, and in the “best practices” of the “best writers.”
    This fantasy is easy to disprove. If one takes a collection of writers who 
     current critical judgment would agree are among our best, can one find
     a single example of any variation of the Fifty-Star Theme? The answer
     is no."  (97)

I found I could persuade my 10th graders to “inhabit” a point of view different 
from their own by engaging them in dramatic re-enactments; however, when my
10th graders wrote an argumentative paper, all the intellectual and emotional
suppleness they displayed in their dramatic re-enactments went out the window.
Was Friar Lawrence to blame for Romeo and Juliet’s tragic deaths? He certainly
was, argued any number of my 10th graders. To prove it I will devote my first
paragraph to a thesis stating that he was guilty, then will write three body para-
graphs in which I will locate details from the play that support my thesis, and will
finish with a concluding paragraph that reminds you that Friar Lawrence was
indeed guilty of the tragic deaths of Romeo and Juliet. While I found myself, not
too surprisingly, assigning more and more dramatic re-enactments and fewer and
fewer “opinion papers” for my 10th graders as I progressed from my first to my
third year of teaching, I never found a satisfactory way of addressing the deeper
question of how to persuade my students, at least in their writing, to unleash
themselves from the safety and security of their predetermined positions.

Eight years later, at Teachers College, when I began teaching my "Composition for 
Teachers of English" course for a third time, I faced a similar but more vexing ver-
sion of this same mind-set. My writing course now used both Peter Elbow’s Writing 
Without Teachers (1973) and James Moffett’s Teaching the Universe of Discourse 
(1968) as its primary texts, and had become well enough known and highly enough 
regarded to attract a small but vocal population of graduate students in the Teaching 
of English to Speakers of Other Languages Program at Teachers College. “This 
business of a student-centered approach to writing development is perhaps a defen-
sible strategy for English speakers,” they argued, “but it simply will not work with
our ESL adult populations.” These TESOL teachers were quite clear that what their
students needed were clearly structured lessons with a strong focus on grammar and
conventions. “How are they going to avoid making mistakes in their writing unless
we, as their teachers, point these out to them?” they would ask. “And if we were to
put this Elbow nonsense to use in our classrooms, all we’d observe would be the
blind leading the blind.”

While I did not agree with these strongly held opinions about the writing develop-
ment of adult ESL students, I could not challenge them effectively as a practitioner 
since my own experience was limited to a single summer’s teaching, many years 
earlier, in Hong Kong. How might I introduce points of view that gently questioned 
these quite plausible pedagogical certainties? How might I do so without claiming 
more than I could reasonably claim on the basis of my own quite limited teaching 
experience with adult ESL learners?

Appropriately enough, the answer came right from Moffett’s Teaching the 
Universe of Discourse. “Start by understanding how difficult it is,” Moffett might
be imagined as saying, “to theorize about best practices in the teaching of writing
to ESL adults.” To do so convincingly, according to the theory set forth in
Moffett’s book, involves not only imagining a large general audience of readers,
but also the writer’s ability to hypothesize “what could happen” in many future
ESL classrooms beyond those in which one has actually taught. These imagined
admonitions come from a theory of discourse that Moffett had been developing
since his early years teaching English to high school students in New Hampshire.
As presented in the collection of articles that formed the basis of his book, this
theory posits that all acts of written communication can be understood as occurring
at one point or another on a “ladder” of increasing abstraction regarding the
“distance” between the author and his or her subject on the one hand, or between
the author and his or her reader on the other. 

A writer writing notes to himself or herself about an object or event that is close at 
hand—“what is happening”—would be engaged in writing that represents the 
closest possible “distance” between author and subject. Conversely, a writer
presenting a theory about “what might happen” in a periodical designed for a
general readership, would be engaged in writing that represents the greatest
possible “distance” between both subject and audience.

It did not take me long to realize, given this perspective on writing argumentatively, 
that I was asking my Teachers College TESOL students to write persuasively from 
something akin to the farthest points “out” on both sides of Moffett’s abstraction 
ladder. I was asking them, that is, to tell “what happens” in adult ESL classes
while addressing a wholly imagined audience of general readers.

Assisted by a sequence of mimeographed writing assignments then circulating 
among those familiar with Moffett’s work (later published as Active Voice: A 
Writing Program Across the Curriculum, 1981), I began to design a sequence
of writing assignments along the lines suggested by Moffett’s “ladder of
abstraction.” My primary purpose was to present a practical application of
Moffett’s theory of discourse so that everyone in the class could experience
this rather complex theory firsthand. I also hoped, however, that I might
unsettle some of the fixed notions of conventional, grammar-oriented writing
instruction that were held by my TESOL students.

I started by asking my students to write from the perspective of a speaker on a soap-
box in Central Park advocating practices in the teaching of writing that were the 
opposite of those presently held by the author. What would such a speaker say to 
defend his or her position? What arguments and examples would such a speaker use 
to convince his or her listeners of the compelling nature of his or her point of view? 
Next, I asked my students to write out a dialogue between this strident soapbox 
speaker and themselves, toning down the stridency of the speaker’s stance so that 
the conversation might be civilized and even-tempered. Third, I asked my students 
to imagine that the speaker moved upstate so that face-toface conversation was no 
longer possible. I advised that the conversation be continued, but this time as an ex-
change of medium length letters (I suggested four; most students wrote six to eight).
Finally, as this sequence of writing assignments evolved as I taught it for my fourth 
and final year at Teachers College, I asked my students to step back and imagine 
they had just discovered this exchange of letters and had decided to edit them for 
publication. They would provide a preface in which they told readers something 
about the backgrounds of the two writers, insofar as they had been able to “unearth” 
these personal backgrounds in their “research.” They would also say something 
about the importance of the topic these two letter writers were addressing—a level of 
importance that led them to decide to publish this consequential exchange of views.

As it turned out, I never did add the final step I had originally envisioned for this 
sequence--transforming this final “edited exchange of letters” into a formal argu-
mentative essay. I think what we all realized by the time we became “editors” of 
these two correspondents’ exchange of letters is that the forcefulness of one or an-
other of their opening points of view was far less interesting than what motivated 
them to adopt their initially antagonistic stances and what led them to engage in ex-
tended correspondence with one another. 

What I do know is that I stopped hearing about the indispensability of a grammar 
based approach to the teaching of writing to adult ESL students, or to non-ESL 
high school students in New York City public schools for that matter, and I did 
hear a great deal about the “characters” that my students had brought into being 
as a result of the seriousness with which they assumed their roles as editors.

What I would say today is that this particular sequence of writing assignments 
utilized my 10th grade students’ ability to “inhabit” the role of someone other
than themselves, putting this talent in the service of helping us all to view those
holding opinions diametrically opposite to our own with greater understanding
and sympathy. And isn’t that what “teaching toward adulthood” is all about? This
is the contribution that Moffett helped us realize: we were all teaching writing in a
wider “universe of discourse” where our roles were to help our students and
ourselves come into greater awareness of our capacities not only as writers but also
as more fully developed human beings.

Lessons Learned From the Founders of Passion and Practice

The chapters of Teaching Writing Grades 7–12 in an Era of Assessment: Passion 
and Practice that follow introduce a wide range of teaching practices that have 
been refined and modified over the years by middle and high school teachers
committed, as were the founders I’ve just discussed, to the centrality of writing in
their English Language Arts curricula and to the potential of each of their students
as writers. While the last 12 years, with their emphasis on educational policy
focusing exclusively on “accountability” as measured by test scores, have
unquestionably been difficult and frustrating times for these teachers, the teacher
writers in this book have each found ways to “make their writing curriculum work
for them,” to borrow Tim Gunn’s mantra from Project Runway. Since each of
these teachers is also a writer, as well as a colleague with whom I’ve worked
directly in one or another of the Invitational Summer Institutes of the San José
Area Writing Project, they also represent a group about which I’m especially proud.
Not only have they found a way to bring their passion for writing and the teaching
of writing to their students, they have also found the time, energy, and commitment
to bring what they have learned to the wider audience of this book’s readers.

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* Portions of this chapter appeared in different form in the Winter 1996 and 
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